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By technician (Wed Oct 06, 2021 at 07:08:41 PM EST) (all tags)
Its where I'm publishing this short story.


https://blixco.substack.com/p/lakewood?justPublished=true

I think if you subscribe with an email, you'll get updates via email? It's what all the cool kids are doing that aren't here.

< Hot Dog, we have a weiner!
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Good read by georgeha (4.00 / 1) #1 Thu Oct 07, 2021 at 03:33:19 PM EST
The Kia bit was confusing.

I'm guessing the narrator lost the pickup he found at the house at some point, and then found a Chevy.


Yep. by technician (2.00 / 0) #4 Fri Oct 08, 2021 at 04:36:04 PM EST
It's in there, driving around looking for the pickup. I can clarify that though.

I've gone back and edited a bit, and I've added a chapter. It'll be added to regularly.

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Get with an editor by wiredog (4.00 / 1) #2 Thu Oct 07, 2021 at 06:48:17 PM EST
and this will be highly publishable.

Earth First!
(We can strip mine the rest later.)

Oh yeah, it was riveting by georgeha (4.00 / 1) #3 Fri Oct 08, 2021 at 09:55:46 AM EST
and I'd like to read another chapter.


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I'm hoping by technician (4.00 / 1) #5 Fri Oct 08, 2021 at 04:37:06 PM EST
That once I get about halfway through, I can do a treatment for the second half and see about finding an editor, maybe.

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Cheers by LoppEar (4.00 / 1) #6 Sat Oct 09, 2021 at 07:27:58 PM EST
(n)ice (t)ax


Finally took the time to sit and read by miserere (2.00 / 0) #7 Tue Oct 12, 2021 at 02:50:29 PM EST
And now I definitely want to read more. Are you updating the post itself, or will you be posting additional chapters in separate posts? I subscribed, and I want to make sure I don't miss anything :)

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