Dont ask me how but the tiki found bobby
He thought the idol was some hawaiian hobby
Turned out the God was mean and vicious
A good warning for any unbeliever.
camFreedom, liberty, equity and an Australian Republic
Power up your flaming yo-yos already! --StackyMcRacky
and yay for the return of TF!I agree with clock entirely --Kellnerin
my ignorance was more blissful.
and then i found a typo AFTER i sent it.. but isn't that always the way....
If by chance your entry doesn't win, perhaps you'll post it here or somewhere ...?
"If a tree is impetuous in the woods, does it make a sound?" -- aethucyn
It was a good exercise though I guess, forcing me to focus on things like "plot" and "character", which I generally disregard in favour of rhythm and tone.
So yeah, personal growth and all that. Actually I think I'm finally coming to terms with the fact that when people read a short story, they're generally expecting a story to be told, as opposed to being WTFed square in the face by the scattered, trashy vignettes that I tend to produce