I'd like to see a more gentle handling of the brush around your nose. That alone might make the difference.
Your eyes are spot on.
Thanks for posting this. I really get a kick out of self-portraits."It means more if you have to earn it, even if it's by doing something as simple as eating a meal." Kellnerin
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Perhaps you've been on an eating and drinking binge and recently busted your nose?
The top lip bothers me as well . . . see, this is why drawing or painting yourself is so near impossible. Please don't take my comments too harshly though, just used to such quality that I think I can critique very god work.