There's not really much to say, it was rightly panned by the critics for lacking in plot, with what little there was being particularly weak. All of which is basically a consequence of starting after the deadline (yes the lastest last last deadline) and randomly typing away for 15 odd minutes. Initially it was going OK (the arrest, and the interview bits) but it wasn't going anywhere.
I tried to tack on a bit of motivation and twist but they weren't really thought out (and in places a little contradictory) and it badly shows!
I'm pretty sure it's poor showing is due to failings in the story itself rather than formatting - I'm not quite sure why Word Mangled the format but I only noticed after the upload, and by the time I tried to upload a fixed format version the upload option had already gone bye-byes. Fortunately (or possibly unfortunately) after a pm from me, the awesome 256 reinstated the version misformatted had uploaded.
At least I did actually manage to enter this one though which I am happy about and it gives me more impetuous to enter again (maybe even thinking the plot out before hand next time)
Cider, Beer and Sambuca
MFC progressing slowly latest version can be heard here http://www.upload66.com/file/8277/BallotThis2-mp3.html
which is just a bit tacked on to what I posted before. Just need some lyrics, learn to sing, to get my chops up to speed (very little playing this last month) record a kick arse solo and rerecord all the fluffed notes (and timings) now. So it's almost done ;).
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