Further down the page I wrote the first line of the story that became Egg. It was done in two bouts. It needs more editing than it got (none, and no outside eyes, which I deem essential). Direct references to HuSi might have had a blatant pandering element, and I"ve been rightfully slammed for it. I almost named the guy after a real user, but that would have gone too far.
Thanks to those of you who voted for it, able to see beyond the parts that went klunk. I think the competition was stiff, and I still think She Said is better.
So by the rules of the game I get to host the next one. I'll give it a week or so, but not so long that the deadline interferes with NaNoWriMo.
I've been writing fiction off and on for about 10 years. I appreciate the crits and the compliments. Maybe it's time to start shopping stories.
So, er, thanks. I'll go be embarrassed over there for a while.
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