At first it was really short and I didn't think it was any good, but Blix and a friend of mine in journalism did some edit work on it. They told me where to flesh it out and all that, so I reworked it over and all. I thought that the pacing of it mimicked a sex act as well, with the paragraph of short staccato sentences almost like thrusts in the middle, but that may not have come across. Overall I have no regrets.
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