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You are too much for me.
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Wed Apr 09, 2008 at 05:03:25 PM EST
That's good. My only comment would be to slow down a bit, you speak a bit fast and I think it loses some of it's power because of that.
I enjoyed it.
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smart, pretty, sane. pick two
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Wed Apr 09, 2008 at 05:34:45 PM EST
Listening to myself I realized it (the first two takes were waaaaay too fast). But my voice was disappearing (I was getting sick -- now complete today with mucous and headache!) so I put it to bed quick.
"it's been a long time since i let self doubt keep me from doing anything. much to the chagrin of those who have to observe the consequences." -- 256
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